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Sandy Lender is the editor of an international trade publication and the author of the fantasy novels Choices Meant for Gods and Choices Meant for Kings, available from ArcheBooks Publishing, and the series-supporting chapbook, What Choices We Made.

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Monday, March 31, 2008

A Day For Charlotte Bronte Fans
Or...The Dragon is foregoing all the typical posts to just bask in the glory of Charlotte

On March 31, 1855, the great Charlotte Bronte passed away from what doctors reported as either phthisis or Hyperemesis gravidarum. The former, a Greek term for tuberculosis, is what's listed on her death certificate, and is what many in the village of Haworth died from in that time period; the latter, extreme sickness during pregnancy, is also highly likely.

She was 38 years old.

She was working on a novel entitled Emma.

She was a literary genius and an inspired, motived young woman who had overcome adversity and tragedy starting at age 5 when her mother died, continuing at age 9 when two of her sisters died from abuse and neglect at boarding school. Her troubled older brother ended up disappointing the family with a "difficult" life (or drinking himself to death) rather than contributing to their financial well-being. (I don't mean to sound harsh, but it would have been great if Branwell could have stepped up to the plate instead of pining over a married woman who rejected him.) When Charlotte's unrequited love stabbed her in the heart, she got to work. She made plans.

Charlotte attempted, with her sisters, to assemble a boarding school there in Haworth so she and her sisters wouldn't have to sell themselves out as governesses, a task none of the remaining three looked forward to. When the school could attract no students (I might be averse to sending my daughter into a tuberculosis-infested village myself), the girls had no choice but to seek employment abroad. When circumstances brought them home again for Branwell's trying death scene, Emily and Anne took ill and Charlotte ultimately found herself mired in tragedy again.

Yet that woman rode through like a champion.

She poured her sorrow into her letters and poetry, but the fact that she carried on is heroic in light of all she endured. For people who have never read her story, I recommend picking up The Brontes: Charlotte Bronte and Her Family, by Rebecca Fraser, published in 1988 by Ballantine. The story is presented with plenty of historical fact, but it's told in a novel-like fashion. If you're up for a bit more historical information presented mostly in the characters' voices through excerpts of letters with narration to explain events, Juliet Barker's The Brontes: A Life in Letters, published in 2002 by The Overlook Press, gives a clear picture of their lives and trials. The original, of course, which Charlotte's father requested, is Elizabeth Gaskell's The Life of Charlotte Bronte, and it is written in novel fashion. You can pick up a reprint anywhere.

The reasons I consider Charlotte a literary genius include the works she left us, but also include her inspired moment when she discovered her sister Emily's poetry one evening and recognized the power and potential there. Charlotte didn't just wrap up those poems and represent Emily as a poet in London. No, she put together a book (which I'd commit a capital offense to get my hands on now) of poems from all three sisters and marketed the thing. It became a first offering from the Brontes (writing under the oh-so-wise male pseudonym of Bell). Next, they had three novels to market.

Are you ready for this? Just like writers of today, Charlotte had to apply to publishers to get the manuscript reviewed and printed. She took it upon herself to send the parcel out, and send it she did. Once. Twice. Three times. Four... In Barker's Life in Letters, page 72, Charlotte's letter to her friend Ellen Nussey, dated Jan. 24, 1840, talks of working on a relationship with a difficult person. Charlotte writes, "and my motto is 'Try again.'"

She stuck to that motto with her writing career. Fraser states in her book listed above, page 246, "To her polite enquiries, publishers...returned no answer. But Charlotte was made of sterner stuff; she would be responded to." She wrote to the firm that published the encyclopaedia to get advice from someone there. Although her first novel, The Professor, was rejected time and again, ultimately not published until after her death, her second novel, Jane Eyre, became a timeless classic. It's a gothic fiction novel that woke an industry. The reviewers went wild with their opinions, either loving or hating it based on its dark, brooding hero and its tormented, masculine themes that people of the day claimed were inappropriate for Christians and women to consider. (Imagine.) Charlotte had to set about defending her Mr. Rochester. Yet she weathered that storm, too.

She defended her sisters, who were vilified by the reviewers who found fault with their masculine tones and "unChristian" themes of violence and debauchery in their novels. Now, if you've read Wuthering Heights (by Emily), Agnes Grey or The Tenant of Wildfell Hall (by Anne), you'll know that the bad characters are truly bad; Anne knows how to make you loathe an evil man. But even I get miffed when I read some of these old-time reviews. I have to wonder how obnoxious these old sots were, sitting around with their smoking pipes, writing up their pompous opinions while staring down their noses at the pages...and then returning to their bath houses with their fair-skinned playtoys before returning home to their wives. You can't tell me these men were any less corrupt than a New York Times-like reporter who hides behind the First Amendment today.

By the end of her days, Charlotte bested the reviewers. She outlived her siblings, which, on one hand, is a sad statement. On the other hand, and I'll admit the selfishness of this, I'm thankful the reading public was allowed the years we were gifted. I'm also thankful for the example she set. If someone as monumental as Charlotte Bronte had to face rejection, who are we to complain when query letters come back with form rejection letters inside? Consider the publishers of the mid 1840s who said "no" to Curer Bell. Ah, how they were kicking themselves in 1849, 50, 51, etc.

Have you received a spate of rejection letters during your writing career so far? Now, don't you let that get you down. Just consider how those folks will be kicking themselves when your "Jane Eyre" hits the shelves and the reviewers are giving it such publicity that every household is uttering your name in disbelief. Maybe it won't be your first novel that hits the bigtime, but with role models like Charlotte to guide us, we can see that the first one may be the one to set aside and let cool. Even though The Professor is a fantastic novel, and the autobiographical tidbits within it wrench your heart out (if you know Charlotte's unrequited love story), the masterpiece to launch Charlotte into the literary stratosphere was Jane Eyre.

What's your masterpiece? I can be honest and tell you I don't believe Choices Meant for Gods is my masterpiece. Yes, I have a bunch of five-star reviews on Amazon for the book. Yes, I'm proud of the story. Yes, the characters sing. But, let me tell you something: The sequel kicks its butt.

Let Charlotte inspire your masterpiece out of you...She is a constant, phenomenal source of inspiration for me.

"Some days, I just want the dragon to win."
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Friday, March 28, 2008

Grammar Guide
Punctuate for Clarity, Part V, Quotations in Formal Text

(Ed. note: I do not use serial commas in this article, pursuant to AP style.)

If you’re writing a term paper, letter to the editor, business letter or cover letter, etc., and you want to include a quotation, there are specific rules to follow. If the quotation is brief, you must watch your ending punctuation, and we’ll address that, but you can separate your phrases with a comma. For example, your term paper might read as follows:

Charlotte Bronte gave her heroine, Jane Eyre, a fiery spirit. When Mr. Rochester would detain the troubled governess, she said, “I am no bird; and no net ensnares me: I am a free human being with an independent will.”

The attributive phrase that precedes the quotation is set off by a comma. The quotation from Jane Eyre ends with a period in the novel, thus it takes the period at the end of the sentence before the quotation mark in the text here. If we elected to chop up the quote, ending it at at the word being, the punctuation would move. For example:

When Mr. Rochester would detain the troubled governess, she said, “I am no bird; and no net ensnares me: I am a free human being...”.

The punctuation must denote the end of the correct sentence, and that is the outer construction—the construction without the quotation marks.

Let’s say you wanted to really impress your English professor and were quoting something from both Bronte and the Lender novel Choices Meant for Gods. Your next quote turns out to be long. You have to pay attention to your introductory punctuation and make a judgment call on whether or not to indent the quote, essentially setting it off from the body of your paper.

First of all, a quote is usually considered lengthy if it is more than three or four lines of poetry or if it is more than one paragraph of text. In these instances, you end your attributive phrase with a colon, allow a single line of space between the attributive phrase and the quote, and then set the quote off by insetting it (setting it off) in the body of your paper with left justification. MLA, Chicago Manual of Style and various English professors will dictate how far in the inset should be. If the quote isn’t all that long, but you still feel it’s long enough to warrant more than a simple comma to set it off, use a colon, but don’t go to the extreme of setting it off in the body of your paper. Here’s your example:

To demonstrate a flashback scene, I quote from Lender’s “Choices Meant for Gods”: “Hrazon had swallowed his pride and requested Drake be imprisoned, not exalted. He challenged the court to stand up for morality. The implication that they might ignore morality had offended them. By the time the court adjourned, Godric was forgotten again, and Drake was handed the leadership of Kida and an order never to come within a league of Amanda Chariss Derdriu. The latter was merely a nod or a ‘thank you for trusting the hierarchy’ tossed at Hrazon. The wizard could have turned every one of them into charred piles of bone with the blink of an eye, and Godric would have applauded him.”

Notice that you will use quotation marks to surround the quotation in this instance. For an extremely long quotation that you inset, no quotation marks are needed. The use of indenting the body of the quote in your paper signals to the reader that the section is a quotation.

For Standard English grammar resources, I recommend Creative Writer's Handbook (fourth edition) by Philip K. Jason (a friend of mine) and Allan B. Lefcowitz (available from www.prenhall.com/english) and Eats, Shoots & Leaves The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation by Lynne Truss (available from www.penguin.com). For a great gothic fiction novel that every person on the planet should read, I recommend Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte. For a great epic fantasy novel that borrows elements I didn't realize I was borrowing from the great Charlotte Bronte until I had the thing complete, I recommend Choices Meant for Gods by Sandy Lender (which is available in both hard cover and as an inexpensive eBook at http://www.archebooks.com/BookIDX/Indexes/Fantasy/CMG/CMGDesc.htm.)

(Sandy Lender has been an editor in the magazine publishing industry for sixteen years, is an editor in the book publishing industry and is the author of the epic fantasy novel Choices Meant for Gods, available from www.archebooks.com.)

"Some days, I just want the dragon to win."
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Wednesday, December 05, 2007

Wednesday's Inspirational Quote of the Day for Writers
“I am no bird; and no net ensnares me: I am a free human being with an independent will.”
— Jane Eyre (Charlotte Bronte)

Fantasy Author Sandy Lender wishes you a fabulous day! Keep reading for more posts at today's blog. (Word of the Day for the AuthorIsland.com and Choices Meant for Gods contest is just below today's grammar/writing post.)
"Some days, I just want the dragon to win."

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Saturday, April 21, 2007


The Women in the Attic of Choices Meant for Gods
Or...how Charlotte Bronte influenced my fantasy novel

Yes, I will openly admit that there are allusions to Jane Eyre in Choices Meant for Gods. Now, I didn't lift any text -- no plagiarism for me. (I went in and fixed that moment of insanity during editing. Yeah, believe it or not, I had a scene almost verbatim from the garden when Rochester proposes. Can you imagine? I was horrified when I figured out what I'd done.) Anyway, on this, the birthday of Charlotte Bronte, I wanted to pay homage to her and do my daily marketing for my fantasy novel.

A couple of weeks ago, I shared some of the Old English and Anglo-Saxon themes and concepts that influenced Choices Meant for Gods. Today, I'll tell you a few of the Jane Eyre themes and concepts that influenced the novel. The funny thing is that I purposefully sought out ways to incorporate the Old English devices in the plots of CMG. The kennings and littotes and use of alliteration that few people will catch are in there by design. The allusions to mead halls and weregild and scaly monsters from fens - it's all contrived like a Duranie using a well-known Duran word in conversation. But my Jane Eyre references surprised me. I didn't realize I put them in until it was editing and marketing time. I was writing up some text to put on a bookmark and used the word "orphan" to describe Amanda Chariss and said to myself, "wait a minute." And things started tumbling into place.

Okay, yes, I had purposefully included a scene where Nigel tells Chariss she's his "lifeline" and there's a "string" tied to his heart between them. Oh, how very "Rochester" of him. But I didn't realize as I wrote his lines that I lifted the entire scene between Rochester and Jane in the garden and nearly got myself sued by some estate (probably the Bronte Society of which I'm a member!).

So there I sat stupefied by the fact that Charlotte's subconscious influence had directed much of the novel without my knowledge. I started seeing similarities. The Taiman Estate, Arcana, bears many similarities to Thornfield Hall, complete with passageways no one's allowed to go into for which only the master keeps a key. Loetha could be Mrs. Fairfax (if she were straight). The family keeps a variety of secrets. Chariss arrives as an orphan with a troubled past. The master of the house falls in love with her but the reader is led to suspect a reason she cannot return the sentiment, despite an ardent desire to. The family takes in another orphan, Sorne, whom I see as a variant of Adele Varens in this list. And the list could go on... It's insane. I had no idea

So, for Book II, I just gave in and named a character General John Riverson. Blatant. You'll hate him instantly because of it.

Now, as for the "women in the attic," if you've already read the novel, you've already met Abigail Farrier. Hmm. She's not living in the attic, literally, but over on the continent of Bellan. Her appearance irritated one of my test readers and one of my early testimonial folks. In fact, the person offering the testimonial asked me to kill her off. Interesting. There should be a study on how the "women in the attic" affect readers of novels... But Abigail Farrier is not Bertha Mason Rochester...as far as I know.

Exploring the ways Choices Meant for Gods was influenced by Charlotte Bronte's Jane Eyre was an interesting exercise for me. Interesting and fun because I adore Charlotte, and I had no idea I was letting her characters and her themes manipulate me. After you've read Choices, you'll have to let me know what other similarities or influences you noticed.

And for a nice post on Charlotte herself, read the article below!

"Some days, I just want the dragon to win."

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Celebrating Charlotte Bronte
Or...The Dragon recognizes the best writer to grace our literary world on her birthday

Something miraculous happened April 21, 1816. The author of Jane Eyre was born. I believe that is the greatest book, other than the King James version of the Holy Bible, that has ever been penned. It cannot be beat. Charlotte wrote a number of other pieces over her tragically short, and tragic, lifetime, but Jane Eyre is, in my humble opinion, her crowning achievement. There are passages that stun me even today, after I've read the novel more times than I can count.

It always surprises me when someone says they've not heard of Charlotte or they've not read any of her works. I wonder why our school systems bother teaching the kids to read if they're not going to hand them fine literature to cut their teeth on. But this post isn't meant to be a diatribe on society's failings or lack of school funding. This is going to be a "Charlotte Bronte is Great" post. Let us proceed.

How many of you have read Jane Eyre? Show of hands... Hmm. That's not many. I could give you a synopsis but the plot twist about half-way through the book is so very clever and so very infuriating that I hate to give it away in a synopsis. And the fact that Charlotte proceeds to take the reader off to another plot development, stranding the one you've grown to love...well...I just can't sit here and offer you the story. You have to read it for yourself (unless you've seen the movie -- and several have been made with another due out from England any day now) and see if you don't throw the book across the room in a rage. Lucky for Charlotte she's not here to get the angry e-mails and phone calls from fans demanding quick answers, eh?

But Charlotte wrote some other works that are just as fine. She has this spate of juvenilia that foreshadows Jane Eyre, Shirley, Villette, and The Professor (oh, and am I allowed to state in a public forum that I empathize with her on The Professor?). She has a stash of essays she wrote while studying in Brussels that boggle the mind and a collection of poetry from both her "everyday" life and her juvenilia that I recommend for rainy days. Now, she's not the poet that her sisters Emily and Anne were, but some of her verse is soothing and offers insight to this amazing young woman.

Then there are her letters. Charlotte Bronte is my kinda gal. I wish I could have met her because she and I could have been pen pals. I'm almost jealous of Mary Taylor and Elizabeth Gaskell and, above all, Ellen Nussey, who got to correspond with Charlotte on such a regular basis. There's one letter in particular that I want to post today so all you visitors to The Dragon can see how fun and vivacious Charlotte was "in person." I'm copying this from Juliet Barker's The Brontes A Life in Letters, 1997. This is Charlotte writing to her friend Ellen on May 15, 1840. (I wish I'd read it 14 years ago.)

"Do not be over-persuaded to marry a man you can never respect - I do not say love, because, I think, if you can respect a person before marriage, moderate love at least will come after; and as to intense passion, I am convinced that that is no desirable feeling. In the first place, it seldom or never meets with a requital; and, in the second place, if it did, the feeling would be only temporary: it would last the honeymoon, and then, perhaps, give place to disgust, or imdifference, worse perhaps than disgust. Certainly this would be the case on the man's part; and on the woman's - God help her, if she is left to love passionately and alone."

Now those of you who have already read Choices Meant for Gods can see where Amanda Chariss gets some of her notions from, eh? Don't think my main character developed out of thin air... No, I have a great admiration for Charlotte, and I'm very much looking forward to sitting down to tea with her when I get to Heaven someday.

In the meantime, happy birthday to Charlotte Bronte, the greatest writer we ever had on loan from Heaven.

"Some days, I just want the dragon to win."

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